Writing Unforgettable Fiction—Part III

Story Trumps StructureLast week, I talked about plot twists from Steven James’ Story Trumps Structure. This week, we’ll look at Character Struggles.

Here’s a great way to start it out: “To initiate your story, your protagonist will either 1) lose something vital and try to regain it, 2) see something desirable and try to obtain it, or 3) experience something traumatic and try to overcome it.” Pg. 42.

There are three basic types of character struggles: internal, interpersonal, and external. Click to Tweet

They don’t all have to be present in your story, but today’s readers are demanding and discerning. “Writing multilayered tales that emotionally engage readers is the best way to keep them enthralled by your story.” Pg. 42

Internal Struggles

“The more profound the internal struggle, the more profound the change. The question is not just ‘Does the character get what he wants?’ but ‘how does that closure and that new normal affect the character?’ Inner journeys always change us. There must be a satisfying payoff.” Pg. 43

JoyCreate empathy and emotional connection with the readers by choosing what internal struggle they’ll deal with. Here are a few to choose from:

We all want to be loved. We want a sense of meaning, purpose and belonging. We want to find pleasure, truth, and happiness. We want adventure, freedom, and peace. And we want to be forgiven when we’ve done wrong and a second chance to make things right.

There are universal desires your character could long for: identity, respect, authenticity, significance, acceptance, success, joy, value, justice, fulfillment, survival, and security.

“To find the heart of your story, ask yourself what your character desires more than anything else. Once you’ve landed on that, decide if you’re going to give it to him at the start of the story, then snatch it away, or let him seek what seems just out of reach, or force him to deal with the opposite of it.” Pg. 44

External Struggles

External struggles center around tasks. “External struggles often have to do with the quest for survival or justice (and its close relative, revenge). Readers are curious about how the protagonist will solve the problem.” Pg. 44 External struggles are about character survival or solving a large problem.

But external struggles by themselves, without incorporating some sort of internal struggle, makes for a book that readers will not emotionally connect with. I think the story that combines both internal and external, is more enriching and a better read.

“Emotion comes from identification with the protagonist’s unmet internal or interpersonal desires.” Without an emotional connection, the reader will become bored.

However, the external struggle can ignite or exacerbate an internal struggle. In “Meghan’s Choice” I use both internal and external situations to complicate Meghan’s life. Can she “grow up” and measure up to her father’s expectations of her? Can she make it on her own in a strange and wild railroad town? Can she overcome her own prejudices to accept people who are different from her?

And then there’s the cowboy, Duncan Wilcox, one of Meghan’s suitors. What’s in his past that he won’t talk about that has had him wandering the country seeking something. What? Will he find it?

Interpersonal Struggles

“Every relationship holds the potential for conflict, intimacy, and misunderstanding.” Pg. 45 That says it all. They are also a sort of glue that can unite an internal struggle with an external one. “In a sense, interpersonal struggles are both internal (since they deal with our feelings) and external (since they deal with our relationships with others.)  Pg.45

In “Meghan’s Choice” there is conflict between the three major characters, Meghan, Duncan, and Scott. There is a love triangle of sorts, and there are some interesting confrontations and conversations that I bring out.

The goal in your story is to use all the tools at your disposal to make your story unforgettable. Think about stories you remember the most. Why do they stick in your mind? What makes a story unforgettable to you? Click to Tweet

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